Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Free Verse-That Day Dark

Everyone is unshure if the fire will come
In the air there is a fear of dying
There was very thick smoke
The extremely fierce red and yellow fire
Everywhere is filled with with heat
Theres a sign of relief the fire is finally over
Absoulutely everything is covered in ash
Everywhere i look around it is BLACK
All the nature, is crippeled and burnt
All i see, are the poor people, who suffered in the fire
People are heartbroken, with everything they've lost
Scared and shocked people with nowhere to go! :(

By Chloe

6 comments:

Unknown said...

veRy tOuChiNg ChlOe
xoxo ErIcA

♥...XoX...ChlO3...3m!ly...3r!c@...XoX...♥ said...

Aww...........thx. Erica xox
Did u make ur own account???...
Or do u hust have this 1??? ♥Chloexox

♥...XoX...ChlO3...3m!ly...3r!c@...XoX...♥ said...

tHis PoeM wAS wrOtE in meMorY oF aLl thosE PeOplE tHAt LoSt thErE LivEs iN thE HorRiBle ViCtOrIan BlAcK SatUrDaY BusHfIreS!! :(

B.McGlynn said...

Great Poem

♥...XoX...ChlO3...3m!ly...3r!c@...XoX...♥ said...

Thx Brandan!!

wookiee.x said...

awwww so sad!!!!!!!!!! luv it! cya xoxo